Once summoned by the depths at sea
There was so little air
That everything became a strain
But fearless hearts don't care
Now when such countless forces
Decide what they shall take
There is no way to overcome
The ageless mass of waste
Then, as these facts are callous
And there is no hope,
The fearless child who lost his ship
Now gives up on his rope
Accepting that he'll die now
His strength creates his warmth
And he becomes protected
By hurtful, endless force
So, since then, he would struggle
Not to be the Ocean's slave
Inside his hostile bubble
At the breaking of the wave
Comments
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This is absolutely phenomenal. I'm sorry now I did not accept prewrites as this one surely would have taken the gold. I adore it from the first word to the last. I'm in awe. Truly!
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Fantastic!
I loved this (:
Especially the second
stanza.. really good.
I haven't talked to you in awhile.
How's like treating you?
<3 Alyssa
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