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picking scabs.



i peel your smile
into halves, then quarters

just to poke at the pink flesh
of the inside of your lies.


i dig
with mustard feet and hands

slippery, sticky

and it feels so good to
tear you inside-out.



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  • LeonLiondas
    December 8, 2008
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    Well done!

    The imagery is painful and true. I like to flow and metaphor. It hurts as it should.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Ouch! Well done in imagery and metaphor...very strong depth in feelings...I have felt this way about a few people in my life......thank you for entering.
    mystic