there beneath florescent night of the 7-11 extravaganza of big gulps,
foreign accents and partially obscured pornography,
i had an epiphany;
if the world ended at this moment i would perish
wearing my sweater inside out and backward
A contest entry
- Phrasology by petalblue2.
600 points, ended November 19, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
constuctive critique appreciated
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I love this, the clothes thrown on in order to satisfy a sudden craving for something else - and the realisation that somehow, your haste for gratification may be the last thing you feel.
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thanks
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i'd rather go with a bang than a whisper. loved it!!!
hebe
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I am so happy you chose this prompt, for some reason this one has always appealed to me. You have mixed the simplicity and random extravagance well here! Thank you for entering.
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I was immediatly atrracted to that one..never a second thought.
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love it, and I would be in a pair of ratty old flannel PJ bottoms
with a wine glass in one hand and a half written poem in the other, meeting my maker half dressed, somewhat soused, and without words to finish the poetry of my life. ~~Artis
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This is something to really think about...lol
All those "mmmmm" moments.
Great job.
Soulful Woman
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thank you, lol
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love it
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