Hippy hoppy hamster happy,
Amist another owner angry, but
My my, merry merry,
Slips, she's sorry, silly hamster.
There goes three friends,
Ever eager to
Roll in the rain. She's,
Freaky floopy furry Freya.
Rolling right 'round rakes.
Everytime she's in the garden.
Yellow beaming eyes
Another friend for me to love.
Author notes
1. I just got a hamster. Give me, in a poetic way, a way to get her to like me. or anything about hamsters. Her name is Freya if you wish to write about her.
I don't usually write like this! I hope you enjoy it, it was fun for me to write. If you didn't notice as you were ready it, it's an acrostic poem! And I used much alliteration to make it fun!
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A contest entry
- My Welcome Back by Amorous Arms.
750 points, ended December 15, 2008, 59 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute ^-^
This is delightfully original =D
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