Time stands still for just a moment
as I entered this wonderful garden
Softly I feel the gentle breeze
brushing across my face
Beautiful serenity over powering my senses
slowly washing away my torment
Intoxicating aromas dance in my brain
magnificent sights overwhelm me
Listening to songs only nature can play
soft silky petals surround me
While I taste the nectar of the stream
becoming one with my environment
Creation at its finest
awakening my soul from it's troubled slumber
Escaping from my sorrow
becoming one with the world
Author notes
Just please credit: __oich__e_mahrnaay___by_night_fate
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
900 points, ended November 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
Comments
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Awww this write is beautiful but it just makes me want to hug you too... This was really emotion and yet peaceful in a way too.. You did such a wonderful job with the prompt. I truly loved it. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you so much sweetie
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Wow,
Inspiring, Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much!
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Bravo!
Indeed a great poem in my book.
It was enchanting.
Blessings for you in the contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your so very kind words
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