Buttons
You know their location,
deep within seamingly healed flesh.
A pin prick of your words,
have me reeling in past tense reality.
Your love was posion,
your words, only a method to getting what you wanted.
Though I know you lie,
I guilt myself in believing its truth.
Buttons
You know their area of weakness;
Lies to wrap your venom in,
You feed from my yearning soul.
Toxic and dangerous,
a few words from the mouth that once tasted mine,
have me nearly losing all I have.
Buttons
You know their location,
and invade as if unknowingly.
Your nothing but the hell,
in which I have finally risen from.
Your only a hated memory,
a destuctive demon I once loved.
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A contest entry
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finally, i see something i cant insult
it makes no sense at all, but thats what makes it mysterious and somewhat amazing
are the buttons scar-like memories?
if they are, thats a really intresting way to describe them
this poem is definity worth putting in the finalists list
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WOW. This was.... I don't even have any wrods to say, it was amazing. I loved the imagery.
Thank you and good luck in this contest
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hmmm.... I liked this. I don't know if I understood it completely, but I like the tone of it. This poem held a lot of attitude, and it flowed very nicely.
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Wow, this is very intriguing and though-provoking, I love the repetition of the word "buttons"..good luck in the contest
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Ok Ive read this a couple times now and I still have nothing that I can critique lol Is a great write, interesting x Good luck in the contest x
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I know exactly what you mean, some people push you just to get what they want, but if you care for them, you don't always notice it until it's too late and it's already damaged you. I can definately relate.
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Now that's venom. Well done, dear, and may I say thank god this isn't aimed at me. That second verse will stay with me a LONG time. Thanks for the read
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