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Never

I'll never apologize for the shattered
mistakes that unmasked your
crumpled views of reality.

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Me again.

My attempt at a one liner.


Jordanne

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  • bird-mad girl
    November 6, 2008

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    GAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

    I had just written you this nice comment on your piece but AP deleted it because of the stupid quick comment thing [which I didn't even use] cause when I scrolled down it disappeared and deleted my comment!!!

    anyway....

    The thing I love about one liners is that people can say so much in only a handful of words. It kind of makes me think sometimes that long poems and pieces of prose are useless but on the other hand, sometimes you need to stretch out that emotion to make it raw and tangible.

    I have a one liner to describe the person you wrote this on: what a fucking asshole.

    Powerful eh?

    xoxo


  • Sandygram silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Well there is alot said in your one line. Strong and powerful words. Thank you for sharing. Take care. Sandy