Mom, I met the most amazing girl
That I'd like you to meet
She's the sparkle to the pearl
She makes me feel complete
She helped me out when dad died
Do you remember how it felt
She held my hand as I cried
She'll make your heart melt
I keep her up late at night
When I can't fall asleep
She whispers songs real quiet
Until I'm out counting sheep
She's my heart, my other half
The girl I wish to marry
She knows how to make me laugh
And calm me when somethings scary
I see us in fifty years
Watching movies in our bed
Not a worry, not a fear
"I love you's" still being said
We watched the sunset
On a beaches sandy shore
Our bodies dripping wet
And wanting nothing more
Her smile is pure and pretty
Her eyes are diamond beautiful
Her essence can light a city
And her mood is always hopeful
I want to someday start a family
Build a house for us all to grow old
A big backyard for kids to play happily
Where the story of our lives unfold
Mom, I wish you were still here
To meet my future wife
But I know you still watch from up there
Because you sent this angel into my life
A contest entry
- Secret Lovers - Picture Prompt by sensualbutterfly.
550 points, ended November 10, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - love of a lifetime by Storm-Goddess.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
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700 points, ended November 14, 206 entries
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You broked one of my rules but I am going to let it slip. Because I would be so stupid if I DQ, your poem is to great to pass it!. I really love your poem! It is AWESOME! This made me smile
. I hope you do wonderful in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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WOW this is truly amazing !!
jus too gud !!
Mom, I wish you were still here
To meet my future wife
But I know you still watch from up there
Because you sent this angel into my life
Possibly the best way to end a poem like this . -
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amazzing write.....emotional and heart wrenching at the same time......best wishs in the contest and wow again
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Truely amazing
it ends kind of sad but yet beautiful , every graceful word from your pen drips with love lasting .
But if she lights your life with just a smile your mom i bet would be very happy is the one you want to be your wife . masterfully written and best of luck and please keep writing
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That is one of the most beautiful writes i have ever read. The ending is so heartbreaking, yet resigned, knowing that his mother sent an angel, oh thanks so much for your words....
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Thank you for the comment :]
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Absolutely beautiful! I love this write! Thank you for your entry
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