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Vampire Baseball

A fun simple game of baseball
Alright simple not so much
Not in a vampire free-for-all.

Thunderous cracks from a baseball bat
That would match a
Horrific storm tit-for-tat.

Distance from a swing
That would make professional athletes
Feel the sting.

It's definitely a sight to see
Until three strangers appear
And one's eyeballing me!

Staring me down like I'm a snack
My love protects me
Crouching like a tiger ready to attack.

Me fragile and breakable the family vows
to protect me at all cost
From the evil one who prowls.

Author notes

Pt 3 in my twilight-esqe poetry set.

Unfinished

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