My heart cries for you
Come back it says
Like you'll actually hear
My lips stay shut as I walk inside
The door shuts behind me
While you drive off
Gone for the day
But it seems much longer
My heart aches for your warmth
My lips long for your kiss
My hands hope for your grasp
Yet your long gone
Time passes slowly
As I wait to see you again
The pain isn't really there
Just a constant wish to be by your side
Forever and always.
What Do You Think?
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lovely and sweet
it's a nice and really sweet poem!i can totally relate to it.good job!
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Makes me wish I was in love again. Beautifully done. Keep up the good work! -Liz
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When ones in love, they long for desires of the heart to never fade. A good poem that will be relateable to those in love.
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awwww that truly is a good poem.
i think that line 3 sounds just a bit awkward, but im not entirely sure how to change it.
other than that...anyone who has truly been in love will relate to this poem.
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