First Anniversary, a special night,
making plans, a glass of wine.
Scented candles, hot bubble bath,
sooooth relaxing, a glass of wine.
Best perfume, all primped up,
hair done right, a glass of wine.
Secrets Victoria, fits right just,
nothing under, a glass of wine.
Roses sent he, with card loving ,
home he’d be right, a wine of glass.
Scrumptious repast, stove the on ,
mats place ready, a wine glass of.
Ringing phone, he’s late gonna’
smoking repast, wineglassofa,
Dizzy couch but time noe more,
wine, wine,wine, snooooooze.
P.N.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt (Sleeping Beauty) by Sandygram.
900 points, ended November 19, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I don't think I would have even lasted 2 stanzas.
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Wonderful creative talent with your humour shining right on in there.
A great write..congrats on the HM.
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LOLO...that wine got to her fast...before the write was even half way done...very creative and different my friend...nicely done...congrat's on the trophy...
mystic
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Holy Moly~
Yes that wine will do it
I remember one time talking to the wall- and waiting for an answer back
Wasn't happening
Congratulations on Your HM!
*throws confetti*
Woot~
Another one to get the funny bone tickled
Love it!!
Thank You for sharing Your Humor and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This one made me smile. Love the ending. I think it happens this way alot. Thank you for entering my contest. This was a pleasure to read. It is most appreciated. You take care. Sandy
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Had to read it three times before I got it. But then again you know me, slow on the up take and that is without the wine. ha ha. liked it.
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LOL..you really breathed some life into this picture. This is great, and you have quite the talent for this funny stuff. Thanks once again for the laughs.
Blessings, Patty
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Glorious. This piece was a real treat. Slowly but surely got Pi**ed. I thought it was hilarious and so well written. I started of reading it seriously, but as i read on, the words just started not to be in the correct order and i suddenly got hit on the head...WAKE UP!. Super superb write. I'm not even going to try and find an error here. You're safe in that respect, unless of course, someone is as pi**ed as the character. Genious. The very best of luck in the contest.
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Wow, you really tapped in, didn't you? hahaha lol and good luck
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this is really cool, good luck in ur contest
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