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Crap

Crap is what you step in in your yard after your dog takes a dump.
Crap is what your hair sometimes looks like.
Crap is all of the stupid little things you could care less about.
Crap is what you say, crap is what you do,
Crap is what you think of me and what I think of you.

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  • samantha jean
    November 4, 2008
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    Haha, I like this. It's cute, and fun.
    Good write.