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We were almost there

We were almost there
Hand in hand
Wandering through the dark unending night
Whispering to each other in muffled voices
Lest the spirits hear us
And weep even more for their isolation
For ours was a love unsurpassed
We held tight to each other
Fear of losing the other
As strong as the fear of losing ourselves
And we walked on
Together and always
We were almost there...

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    such a pretty poem...


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