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Nobody knows

 Nobody Knows what I might do, what I might like.

My sisters are out and about doing things.One sister does wedding decorations,making flower arrangements.Trimming the church and the reception area.Some times she does flower arrangements for funerals.

So everyone sees her work and comments on her stuff oh that is so lovely.you did a great job.i must tell my friends.or i must use you for my wedding.She even takes pictures which turn out wonderful, and then she has a list of people wanting her to take pictures.

I have nothing Nobody Knows anything about me.they don't know i write poetry and children stories.nobody pats me on the back and tells me that was great.

My other sister takes pictures to and everyone raves about her stuff.she has pals to hang with at work.she gets most valuble worker,or employee of the month.with prizes for different things.

But i'm lost without anyone knowing anything about me.There is nothing to draw attention to me.nobody to give me commments.except when i'm on my poetry site.the place where strangers and a few friends make great comments.

I've mentioned i write to some people but do they check out any of my work probaly not.

you see Nobody Knows anything about me or pats me on the back.

Oh i wish someone knew something about me, and would pat me on the back,or highlight my work.

i'm writing and doing stuff but i'm not out there,so Nobody Knows about me

I'm left in the shaddows, well others are front and centre.

am i the only one that is left behind

Nobody knows me,Does anyone know you.

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my thoughts are that of a sister who feels left out,left behind.everything is them.all the time.nobody knows anything about me.even if i did tell them nobody has checked my work out.left in the dark.with noboy knowing or even caring.

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  • condor gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    I thought this was a great right, if not just a little on the sad side. You know, sweetie. You don't have to be noticed to be someone of importance. You make a world of difference to the people here because they come here to meet people like you who are interested in what they are. I work for a local council. I have been here over 24 years doing this job, and you know...nobody knows me. I like it that way. It makes one somewhat mysterious. You shouldn't feel left out or forgotten because i guarantee, you are not. Your writing is superb and you have the knack for creating very vivid and realistic scenes in ones eyes. Does it tell you something when people come and read your works? It does me! Your sisters sound like they are just a little more outgoing than you, but never the less, you are loved just as much as they. Keep up the writing and share with this world of silent people who are there with you. Well done. This was really touching.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    This is your best write..Brenda...It is well written,,,and right to the point! I would ask that the font would be more clear for easy reading...Brenda, you speak for all those in a family, in a community that are lost in the muffle of all others...One that feels insignificant, not mattering...but you have worth...This is a message for all those who need to hear it...A tremendous write! Bravo....You are important and loved!

  • a n e s t h e s ia
    November 5, 2008

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    Ouch. Painful write. Actually, I was just about to check out your work. And hey-- you're a great singer.
    ....no, nobody knows me lol.


  • This Is My Story
    November 4, 2008

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    Thats kinda like me actually. Its weird you basically said my screename in there like a billion times. But this is good. I like it.