All I want for Christmas is you under my tree
Do you think St. Nick will make a special delivery?
Just one more day is all I ask.
One to make memories built to last.
Christmas morning, with snowy weather.
Us as a family, united together.
Watching the joy glow off our children's faces.
Beaming with love while sharing embraces.
One more chance to hold on tight.
Another try to make everything right.
A true celebration of all that God gives.
Not a day of questioning why he didn't let you live.
All I want for Christmas is you under my tree
Because it is lonely down here, with just my memories...
Author notes
10. All I want for Christmas is you under my tree.
Option1: Something about Christmas. Anything?
In a list
A contest entry
- Options!!!! Anything goes. by Jaffa-.
550 points, ended December 10, 2008, 52 entries
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a lovely Christmas wish
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sorrowful, but hopeful joy. wonderful job good luck in the contest -
This is really loving and beautiful. I really like it. Great flow, well done and good luck!!
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thats sooooo goooooodddd
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i love this!! its so heart warming and sad but amazing please write another please i love the way it flows
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the last four lines are so unexpected...sorry for your loss - this is very powerful
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The title said "Sad" but I didn't think it was
going to make me choke in my gullet.
Very touching piece. Thanks for sharing
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Wow, Sad & beautiful...
Heartfelt, honest & touching...
Great descriptive narrative, full of the most wonderful imagery expressing the heart's desire...
Another moving piece that made for a compelling read...
Well done!!!
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Very Heartfelt.
A sad but beautifully written poem I can so relate to. Take care. Sandy
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Yikes, that is sad!
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A very touching piece that I can relate to all too well. Thank you for your fine entry.
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wow, i really like that.
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