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Tears No More

Tears consumed my nights
Only falling astray
Soon they were faded
By such a bitter taste

The bottle only lied
I thought it would help
Left disappointed again
The tears had arrived

Once the blade was the way
The blood was my comfort
It hurt the hearts of others
I’m left to my tears again

The pain, the emptiness
Resided in my heart
Then I saw yours eyes
They caressed each beat

I felt the silk stroke my cheek
Your hands, wiped my tears
I heard a sweet melody
As you spoke upon my ear

The pain, the emptiness
I’ll take it away

I collapsed into his arms
The tears are no more

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    So sad

    This touches my heart for there are so many in such need of this love and comfort


  • MessedupMarionette
    November 13, 2008

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    This is really sweet. It's nice to find that person that can make you feel real again. Good write, and thanks for entering.