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Dear Mr. President

Do you see the little one standing over there?

The one with the ragged dress and greasy hair,

she doesn't have a place to go, alone and lost

her parents and she live in a place where you 

would only plant a tree, a cardboard box is

their only home.

 

Mr. President what will you do for them?

Will you help them grow from this place?

they don't want to be there, it is only a 

space, somewhere that is thrust upon them

that they didn't want, but father lost his job

and more then alot,  Rebbeka there has no food

to eat, no shoes upon her feet.

 

Look at the man that works and struggles every day,

trying to make ends meet in this world of ours, if not

for the programs that help provide food and clothing, 

medical and more he would fail and be homeless as well,

so much to fight, wondering if it is worth this faceless

plight, tell me what will you do for him, me and you?

This could be  your ownly daughter, this could be the

man down the road, this could be Joe the Plumber.

 

Mr. President, how are you going to help us the little

people?We try and we try but no relief can we see,

day in and day out we fight and we cry, every day 

and every night we crawl into our beds and wonder

what the morrow will bring, will we have a job or 

will they end up overseas?  Help us live instead of fail,

help us eat, work, be well, healthy and true, help us try

to be like you in wealth and more.

 

You cannot know what we feel, or how we struggle,

you have more then we could ever hope to have,

help spread the wealth, give us a chance,  how long is

it going to be that you don't see? Come and join us

in this sea of dispair, live on foodstamps, substandard

medical, no money and being unfair, I bet you couldn't 

do it.

 

Mr. President, I am little Suzy, do you see me or will

you look through me? Just because I don't fit your 

color and creed, just because I have many scratches

from which I bleed, because I am homeless you do not

see, I am human, I am here, don't you see I don't want 

to disappear?

 

 

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  • HugsForEveryone
    December 4, 2008

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    This was actually pretty good.
    I kind of felt, though, that you wrote a few paragraphs and cut it into lines, added a few rhymes, then called it a poem.
    I think it could flow more.
    I do agree though, I hate Bush but luckily Obama is coming! I <3 Obama.
    Well done and congrats on the HM
    ~Docteh


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    November 9, 2008

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    I often wonder, how the President sleeps, when he has gotten us into such a mess...I really liked this poem, poet...