Chain me within
this compliant caress
as metal melds me
to your will
and I bend beautiful
in passionate pose
braced bare I prepare for
total submission;
he brushes gentle against
eager exposed flesh
fingers caress curves slow
caught breath bemoans
his pleasure
oblivious to my impatience
He displays total composure,
only eyes reveal his need. . .
Frustration sends messages
allowing audible pout
to escape swollen lips
Eyes downcast, holding pleasure at bay
His commands shiver through
my innocent fantasy
becoming more wanton
as minutes unmask my
own dark desires...
despite whimpers of acquiescence
lovingly, methodically he unbinds cold chains
collects quivering form in deft hands
impales me upon my reward,
an anxious, final craving. . .
and I erupt in
instigated, primal passion. . .
Topping from below
fingernails etch his back
as deliquescent seeps
from heated bodies core. . .
. . .ripping apart his tender control
animalistic growls contort while
intense pleasures course
through ignited bodies. . .
arching back with each
gratifying moan
Master's face of intense appetite
Lust’s lashes then taste skin
in pleasurable pulse
I ache with moaned fever
in delightful deliverance
Tongue touches to soothe
Then thrust finds me
as rhythmic you ride
your bound prize
and sought screams
resonate our release
Author notes
artist: Marty Provost name is Chains
prompt choice:
Alice in Chains
DISCLAIMER:
NONE of us girls are into BDSM, we just got together to make a poem we could show has submission and softness.
A contest entry
- Titles Contest... by voodoo ink.
875 points, ended November 16, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
yes, but what do you think?
Comments
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Makes my heart race.
Very nice.
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Alice in Chains, the title itself is so catchy, reminds me of that american rock band.
Excellent work all of you. This is brilliant!
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and I erupt in
instigated, primal passion. . . .. love it
The flow, the feelings, the touch
Dark erotica and sensual glee
Best wishes in the contest hun
Julie x
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nicely done ladies,
best of luck with this one
Tasha
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Thanx for making the adjustments and putting the title correctly...much appreciated...it's good when people are submissive...hehehe
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We're nothing if not submissive! hehehe
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the pic and the poem both r amazing. these lines --- braced bare i prepare for ;; total submission --- are very great.
can some1 make me a slave just like that?
mslez
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Poet(s) Please read the rules...The title of the poem has to be Alice In Chains...I'll give you one day to change it, or I will remove it, if it doesn't comply to the rules...
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done.
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fixed it ...
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wowow. this is sexy and hot.
i actually like the length of this, especially since i usually like short poems. i didnt notice that this was a collaboration until i read the authors notes, it flowed so well.
great job ladies.
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sounds like valid foreplay
but i hope it will increase in intensity as the night goes on
this is very poetically pleasing
to the mind-eye musings
inner dwelt
but my libido is feeling a little ripped off
give me a word woody
and i'll stick it
i was amazed by poetic prowess
more than sensual expressedness
which i am genuinly thankful for
great collab.
favorites for a reason
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woody.
ripped off
Tim.
don't ever change.
ever.
be careful. we might just make you our next target.
woody.
gawd.
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bring it
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lol, careful what you ask for. . .
dont make me call my homies, you're so not ready for us
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pshhhttt
your homies need to get out more... lol -
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Oh... I get out, don't you worry
mwahahaha... I've seen it all, heard it all... and done it all - at least 5 times! LMAO
Look out my Love Drug Dog.. you might bite of more than you can chew
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LOL
Let's get him Jacks. Wanna?
Woody.
He's gonna get himself more than that.
(he's soooo in trouble)
let me go find Kat, she can get the rope
let's start with the hogtie. . .
oooooh, or we can play maenads, and rip HIM apart,
and devour him
slowly.
he'd surely learn to say "bring it" then, huh?
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mwahaha.. he's in trouble all right!!! He'd better get stoned cause he's in for one hell of a ride, we need to keep him at least a little calm!
Let's get other sissy to take the ankles, you go the wrists... I'll concentrate on....... oh wait... what other limb like part of the body can I have??? Pahahaha
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interesting...
i'll lick my nuts in the meantime
and hope to get stoned
or at least a little woody
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that picture immediately gave me an erection
and i didn't think i was into that s&m stuff
then again I've been a while without the real thing
nice ass
and that chain
i bet it's cold and hard against her ass
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Hahaha! WOW! I love this. You girls are totally awesome and this is totally HOT!! Hopefully soon, I'll be able to write adult poetry like the way you guys do and we can all collaborate! Hahaha, but seriously! Freaking awesome! I am so loving this write! Lol. Well done and best to you in the contest! This is definitely a winner
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Wow! Very heated write here! Wonderfully 'bonded' collaboration as it flows together flawlessly! I totally love this! Good luck in the contest.
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what?..
too long!? so? l.o.l. long and heated sounds like a good thing! but what'll i know i can't think straight right now as i was heat from the first word!!
hot hot hott!!
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Let me know when it is done
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