Dream mixed with reality
Came to my mind.
I was imagining us together:
You hold my hand
And touch the naked shoulder.
Fusion of spirits fades away,
Our lips drink desire
From the sparkling cup of love…
Oh gods give to my tired heart
That’s what has been taken!
Wonderful Eros doesn’t feel
As burning hot as glowing ember
And bringing back the hopes and muses.
…Plaids are obedient and tender
As weightless as mist above the lake
A contest entry
- Emotion! by Brilliant Blonde22.
470 points, ended December 19, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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I like this. I like all the imagery in which you use. Good descriptive use of it. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering this into my contest.
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thanks for this but its not what im looking for, thanks for the entry
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This was a magical ride for me. Your words paint a charming canvas. Good job!
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OdeToMoonlight,
Thank you for your comment. I like your poetries as well. Reading of yours gives me positive energy.
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