...I'll be waiting
watching
the beading on the window
with shallow
measured
breaths
this damp canvas
at my finger tips
a place to doodle
your precious name
A contest entry
- until the rain stills by going nowhere.
1400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is such a cute write. i love it.
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Hey Blue!
Really a fantastic little write here. The timing is so tai chi!
however... (dun dun dunnnn!)
as the pirate once said
whars the arrrr in precious?!
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Oi what have I told you about looking too closely at my arrrrs
Good job someone does, well spotted 
Kat
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my mom always gets mad when i doodle on the windows when they fog.. haha... but i love doing that. this one leaves a feeling of longing, waiting for a moment to arrive... thank you
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please submit asap. thanks
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Done. Thanks for your patience
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