brush strokes
of sadness
painted mist
dampness underfoot,
a forest clearing
is left to weep
chill seeped deep
into earths' core
wishes of hope
peek silently,
hidden beside
a stream running
calmly to the future
Author notes
picture credit: __oich__e_mahrnaay___by_night_fate
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
900 points, ended November 7, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww this was really beautiful. I love the emotion in this, very heartfelt. Thank you very much for sharing. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Great write,
When I read this poem, I saw my hopes and dreams flowing along this stream to the future. Great job and good luck in the contest.
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Facinating!
Well done!
Bravo to you on this grand accomplishment.
Your talent shown through.
Peace to you and best wishes in the contest.
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This is just pretty. I love pieces that end with a hope.
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Well I hope you got no rocks in that stream!
C
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makes for a bumpy ride but you know... nothing ever runs smoothly.
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