When you called me , I swallowed my tears ... My face wore a false smile ...I could'nt let you know my fears ... After you left , still loving you all the while ... When you called me , hope crawled back in ... Clumsy , I stumbled on laughter ... Doubt , looming close to the end ... Realizing there was no 'happily everafter' ... When you called me , I cradled the phone tenderly ... Watched the setting sun ... Hung up , dazed with our memories ... Knowing , our new day had begun ... When you called me ...
A contest entry
- When you called me... by 2lullabyhaven.
650 points, ended November 19, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope you dont mind that I used the prompt 'when you called me ' as the title also .
Comments
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Wow, I am speechless, and this is good thanks for your entry and good luck
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