Slowly
like a river
flowing to a purpose,
engraving history in stone;
upholding ritual throughout culture,
taking note of commitment to
seek enlightenment as
artists disperse
slowly
Author notes
Pic by: Rob Gonslaves
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture prompt by Amera.
2000 points, ended November 16, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
I think this is just perfect in every way bravo
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You are flat good at these and congrats on the bronze I think it was very well deserved
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This is truly beautiful and it fits the picture perfectly and to do it in a Rictameter is brilliant.
Love,
Amera
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WOW. I love the picture! At first I didn't even look at it properly but when I read your words I was confused, so I saw the picture then, and read the poem again, that's when I got the whole imagery in my head properly. Great write
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Very well done. I saw the contest and loved the picture. But, I had no idea what to right. Congratulations on a great poem.
Mike
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