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Rhythm and Blues

Play me a sweet song
I wanna get my dues
Put together Rhyme in the Rhythm and Blues
Its  lovin and strivin playin guitar
Louder and louder down roads afar
Ladies and lovers
I've met a few
Play me that Ol thing called the Rhythm and Blue

Rhythm and Blues chords in a jar
Playing in a band that's right on par
Screaming vocals and Electric guitar
Rhythm and Blues gonna take me real far

Here's to the ladies known quiet a few
Played on the heart strings
With that Rhythm and Blue
Real exciting right there on the stage
Specially when the music peaks in a rage
Sexual feelings an chord innuendo
Lovin and rocking join in the crescendo
Rhythm and Blues back down on the mendo

Rhythm and Blues chords in a jar
Playing in a band that's right on par
Screaming vocals and Electric guitar
Rhythm and Blues gonna take me real far

Roads that I travelled and music I followed
Rock N Rollin trees in the hollows
Back in the Bayou to the trails we must follow
Trusty guitar plays more Rhythm and Blues
Heavy metal influence full mental ooze
Grow me a beard and lots of long hair
Feel the music emotions to spare

Rhythm and Blues chords in a jar
Playing in a band that's right on par
Screaming vocals and Electric guitar
Rhythm and Blues gonna take me real far

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  • badnovocaine
    November 4, 2008

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    Roads that I travelled and music I followed
    Rock N Rollin trees in the hollows
    Back in the Bayou to the trails we must follow

    Oh nice I liked this i was smiling when I read this because I could actually see someone sing this and feel the beat of the song and words.
    I knew that was a pretty good title when i put this up in the contest and you didn't prove me wrong!
    This is good and I enjoyed reading it.
    And it looks like you put a lot of effort into this and I much appreciate it!