Play me a sweet song
I wanna get my dues
Put together Rhyme in the Rhythm and Blues
Its lovin and strivin playin guitar
Louder and louder down roads afar
Ladies and lovers
I've met a few
Play me that Ol thing called the Rhythm and Blue
Rhythm and Blues chords in a jar
Playing in a band that's right on par
Screaming vocals and Electric guitar
Rhythm and Blues gonna take me real far
Here's to the ladies known quiet a few
Played on the heart strings
With that Rhythm and Blue
Real exciting right there on the stage
Specially when the music peaks in a rage
Sexual feelings an chord innuendo
Lovin and rocking join in the crescendo
Rhythm and Blues back down on the mendo
Rhythm and Blues chords in a jar
Playing in a band that's right on par
Screaming vocals and Electric guitar
Rhythm and Blues gonna take me real far
Roads that I travelled and music I followed
Rock N Rollin trees in the hollows
Back in the Bayou to the trails we must follow
Trusty guitar plays more Rhythm and Blues
Heavy metal influence full mental ooze
Grow me a beard and lots of long hair
Feel the music emotions to spare
Rhythm and Blues chords in a jar
Playing in a band that's right on par
Screaming vocals and Electric guitar
Rhythm and Blues gonna take me real far
A contest entry
- Titles and Options OH MY! by badnovocaine.
900 points, ended November 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Roads that I travelled and music I followed
Rock N Rollin trees in the hollows
Back in the Bayou to the trails we must follow
Oh nice
I liked this i was smiling when I read this because I could actually see someone sing this and feel the beat of the song and words.
I knew that was a pretty good title when i put this up in the contest and you didn't prove me wrong!
This is good and I enjoyed reading it.
And it looks like you put a lot of effort into this and I much appreciate it!

