Universe flows
within our human being,
animating visible
through seer and the seen.
Golden ribbon binds,
inseparable one;
flowing in different direction
through all, through none.
Union is unbreakable
needs to be aligned,
space between the trinity;
when filled leaves seen blind.
Empty space brings harmony,
balance through the host;
In unity with each other,
Father, Son and Holy Ghost.
A contest entry
- someone... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 5, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
trinity space and unbreakable bond..that was reallya super effort you put in that poem..loved the read ...uess you should write more on this keep penning -
Amazing write, Kathy. We are all bound in unity by His Almighty Golden ribbon in which keep us inseperable, even though, it's a belief that one cannot see, but feel, such as the invisible winds of time blowing upon upon us or the rays from the sun kissing our skin. Very deep and inspiration, Sis.
You deserve the gold--with every write!
love, friendship, and blessings
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Beauty and devotion. It's all there and so meaningful spiritual and righteousness.
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great..
this is a great poem...
has excellent rhyme and flow through out...
really enjoyed this stanza...
Union is unbreakable
needs to be aligned,
space between the trinity;
when filled leaves seen blind.
well done for penning this piece
keep the ink flowing...
Jayde
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Oh, so finely done... very good rhyme and meter throughout this piece of verse, well deserving of the gold indeed....
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EXQUISITE
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I see the shinny on the piece for the message derived a special treat love the words penned and the message told Hugs always Angel♥
ps I have read before hun .. still awesome ♥♥ -
this is quite beautiful..it tells me that the spirit is within you..and guides your writing..keep well
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A very beautiful and spiritual write you have captured it all and put it together in a little parcel marked 'Love'
Thanks, I needed this!
John
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Trust and innocent
This is so trusting in faith and honest emotion that I feel guilty of even my name! (smiles) Very nice verse, soothing and full of promise
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This is beautiful and truly deserves it's gold trophy I'm sure it will win many more in the future.
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God manifested in 3 different ways (I think)
This certainly merits its Gold Trophy!
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Deep
Profound. Food for thought within this write, well done huni. And congratulations on the Gold trophy.
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Beautifully written! I love the use of words that make me wonder and dream!
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Wow
I LOVE this poem. I believe we are all ONE. This poem describes all that I believe, but cannot word. You are an amazing writer/poet! Thanks again for the comment on my Enlightenment poem. Take care my friend.
- Chris
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I love the idea of a golden ribbon uniting us all. I like to think of it as an invisible tie that binds, one that we see a glint of even now and then and for those times we don't see it, we nevertheless know, it is there. Well done
Mariana
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Profound ponderings...
Interesting subject dealt through the lines of "Golden Ribbon'. An inspiring and stimulating... An aliment for the soul, and nourishment for the mind.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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This is beauty
congrats on gold trophy -
The universe is a giant hologram in which each fragment contains the whole. There is no matter, just a tuned down frequency that transiently makes energy appear like matter by manipulating force fields. In one flash they can however be returned to their original state. It is an instant the aware anticipate intensely. The secret is contained within what science refers to as void or empty space, what the ancients more accurately called the ether - the domain of infinite energy. Thank you for creating and sharing and congratulations on the gold. Take care.
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besides it is beautiful
and has one Gold it deserves
this messages and the way you
penned each word is a blessing
Hugs and God Bless Hun Angel♥
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Golden ribbon binds,
inseparable one;
flowing in different direction
through all, through none. - great lines!
Really well penned!
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Wow.... you are serious so far in what I've read of you with your spirituality.
This has depths that are hard to ponder. What it's also a universal turth that we've known deep inside of us, but have never really allowed it to surface completly.
Here's to the daily struggle to find ourselve wehre we belong!
*cheers*
Great inspiration for the intiated you have here...
Can't wait to see if you could elobortate on this.
And last but not least, thank you ever so much for your time spent on reading my work.
Phil -
this is truly beautiful!!
"Golden ribbon binds,
inseperate one;
flowing in different direction
through all, through none"
well put! thank you
I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Lovely theme, beautiful language, said with poetical grace. thank you.
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Excellent
Such a powerful write. And so beautifully expressed. Congrats on the gold.
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I can certainly see how this took the Gold.. It is a most amazing piece of poetic beauty. Simply beautiful.
Linda
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Oh my
this is so heartfelt and beautiful,
thankyou so much, i needed it today, more than you know
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Lovely words in a beautiful rime
David
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I saw the simplicity within.
A single golden ribbon blowing in the wind. -
I love the flow and continuity of the message in this poem. I've read many poems that seem to pop in and out of context...not yours! Great write.
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a divine write!
you've penned beautiful words here...the ending my favorite:
Empty space brings harmony,
balance through the host;
In unity with each other,
Father, Son and Holy Ghost
thank you for sharing your poetry here!
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Beautiful
Kathy, Always a pleasure to read, and this write is nothing less of exceptionally amazing. Quite deserving of the Gold, I applaud you greatly. This poem really touched me and inspired me, the flow was even and gentle and cast a sense of peace when reading. Thank you for writing! BRAVO!
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Good job. I especially like the second stanza.
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A truly inspirational poem. I do love that last stanza and congratulate you on this well deserved gold
Gaylene
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congrats on gold, an enlightening poem my friend. I am aware of strenghth of unity through your nice poem
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pretty
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very lovely
this piece you have penned is truly a spiritual masterpiece. the unity of the spirit in us has been well worded here! thank you for sharing and congrats on the gold! -
Beautiful. I'm glad I found this one in the spotlight.
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A very spiritual and special piece, this one. It has wonderful meter and rhyme and more importantly a powerful message.
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Lovely. :)
It's got a lovelyrythm and flow to it!
i must admit the last line of the third stanza
"when filled leaves seen blind." kind of threw me off a bit and I'm not entirely sure what it means.... but that could be just me.
All in al good write.
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Great poem
I really like this poem. It flowed nicely. It speaks to you.
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WOW
Stunning in it's spiritual clarity, and breathtaking in the beautiful words you used to pen this with!!
absolutely gold worthy my sweet sis!
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This is breathtaking in it's truth and beauty!
WOW is what I feel after reading and experiencing the conviction in your poem.
Very deserving of the gold trophy!
Kudos to you and thank you for sharing this... I needed to read it, be reminded.
This should be featured!
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Excellent. So much depth for those who want to hear. There in lies the problem though. Not enough WANT to hear.
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wow!
pretty spiritual and very beautiful. i like the flow here, and the words you used to make it so strong and powerful. great write, so raw and full of emotions
congratz on the gold, u totally deserved it. keep penning and keep the faith alive
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When I read it was if I was flying in a dream.
Unseen.
Yet the ribbons always there to break my fall.
Your belief is strong, and no matter what within your life.
Even if the ribbons be frayed.
Your belief will always go on.
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Worthy of the gold..Right to the point...Terrific rhyme and flow...Maybe I like this one the best that symbolizes your faith...
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Congratulations ...
on a well deserved Gold!
Thank you for your spiritual presence.
Love
Myra
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Union is unbreakable
needs to be aligned,
space between the trinity;
when filled leaves seen blind.
A very nice gold
Rick
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Excellent write!
Imagery well addressed in this piece of work. Good title - matches well with the contents. Infinity in unity woven through the lines, unbreakable linked to our Higher. The words in you poem flows nicely - great spiritual insight.
Congratulations on your gold! - well deserved. -
Well Done
So are so right .This was magical whimsical and fun to read. I enjoyed the wording and the flow of words in this piece , and the imagery was being there,. very well done There were no errors. Or No typos. Nothing I Would change. I look forward to your next poem
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I love the way you look at life in this! So much passion! The first stanza drew me in and the rest kept me reading. Definitely deserving of the gold!
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A golden moment!
shines through the hearts of others. It is not easy to create spiritual writes that touch others. All recognize that you succeeded.
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Very nice write. Beautiful poetic imagery.
Congrats on the gold. Well Deserved. -
AMAZING!!!
I loved it! I am not overly religious, but I do believe. After all, my children are proof in themselves that there is something divine among us. Great write very deserving of the gold. ~Gypsy~
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Pure GOLD from begining to end!Well done.
'In unity with each other,Father,Son and Holy Ghost.'
"Lord ,I am not worthy to receive you but only say the word and I shall be healed."
Amen
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This is an excellent write. Congrats to the GOLD.
summer51
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A beautiful poem with excellent rhythm and rhyme.
Excellent take on the prompt with an important spiritual message that we are one with One and that the union is unbreakable once aligned.
Congratulations on your gold!
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Yes...this union is unbreakable..and its relveance and its impact is uiversal all the time..I agree with your golden words..well done...
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A beautiful one. A great look at the pronpt, you can't go wrong with the Trinity. I loved how you lead into it with the three lines of the last stanza. Once in His hand no one can take us out.
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"Golden ribbon binds,
inseparable one;
flowing in different direction
through all, through none."
Such a rie between man kind that you have captured here well done and as always i love your work!!
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As always loved it....be blessed sister.
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Another beauty from your hear and soul my friend!
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It is in the emptiness that isn't really empty that we find union...harmony...peace.
When we quiet our thoughts, we open our potential!
Ovations, dear poetm think is marvelous Spirit work!
Marianne
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