You are killing yourself one hit at a time
The pipe is commiting an unforgiveable crime
Holding it with a deathgrip
The toxins pass your lip
Every breath you take
You feel your body shake
I can't let this go
The toxic smoke you blow
I can see it in your eye
You promised you would try
She made you like this
Poisoned you with her kiss
The deception makes me cry
Because the drugs make life a lie
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Comments
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What craic wit u?
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Huh?
what exactly is a craic?
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i love it. My friend is going through this i was with her doing it too but her mind couldnt take it she went crazy its really sad. great poem i fell it!!!
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Thanks C:
Aw. Sorry about your friend.
My boyfriend and i are having serious issues over this.
We like eachother but our parents are...[lack of better word] Freaking Queers.
and insist on keeping us from eachother.
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