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Your Friend

Hello Chrissy I'm here as a friend
I know from experience I'm lonely as-well
I have kids myself my youngest is so mad

I know from experience he takes after his dad

I like to swim walk and do poems

I like to read and chill out to some songs

I'm easy going a good listener a sport

I like to remind people how good is there worth

I'm mostly happy when I'm with my kids

Because that's when i know my life is

for-filled

I love a good weepie a chic flick  to go

Where i can sit in my chair and yap own my own

Im sorry im just your typical female

a bottle of wine

A  tissue or two  the only thing missing is a good friend like you

 

Author notes

everybody needs a friend even if its only a click away i found loads of friends here and they all make me feel good about myself thank you all

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  • Internal Struggle
    November 6, 2008
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    i really really enjoyed this poem..
    its cheerful and hopeful.. and catchy..
    i feel like its a letter in a way to a pen pal or something..and i especally loved the end..

    Im sorry im just your typical female
    a bottle of wine
    A tissue or two the only thing missing is a good friend like you

    good luck on the contest!!!!

  • cindyloo
    November 4, 2008
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    This is really nice. It has a such a cheerful, bubbly feel to it. I like how you describe your self as "I'm easy going good listener a sport" and "I like to remind people how good is their worth." You are encouraging, friendly and caring. You are a wonderful friend. Good luck in this contest.

    • evelynxxoo
      November 4, 2008
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      thankyou cindy its good to be able to help others i know things are tough for the both of us right now and being able to find comfort in relating to people is a great feeling it makes you feel alive for now anyway i love your feedback because i know you


  • Dragonbabyx3
    November 4, 2008
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    That is awesome! Thankyou so Much! I love it! And I am happy to call you my friend!


  • Patpowers silver member
    November 4, 2008
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    I am sure Chrissy appreciates this. Good message and hope she likes it. THANKS!!

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