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When you called me, my heart fell
and you caught it.

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"When you called me"

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 17, 2008
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    Awesome imagery, depth...thanks for your entry and good luck

  • hurtgurl
    November 10, 2008
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    aww so sweet and deep!


  • Flight of Dragons
    November 5, 2008
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    Very nice

    Cute, and deep. I loved little sayings like that. Well said.


  • Rovingone gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    That sounds like something you should have engraved on a locket of platinum. Someone very deserving must have made it so.