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Insanity Is All I Request: A Quixotic Poem

Insanity is all I request when the urge
to roam comes knocking on my head.

Life wouldn’t be sweet without it,
so why shouldn’t I, a self-proclaimed
Don Quixote, ask for such blessing?

Think how boring existence would
be if sanity was the only option:
there would be no impossible things
to wish for—no pursuit of happiness.

Lady Dulcinea, I shall be by your side
soon, as soon as insanity comes.

So, let Sancho Panza sit on his ass;

I shall sally forth straightway, with my Ford
Bronco as Rozinante, an oil pan as my
helmet, and my weathered pecker as my lance.

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Prompt: Insanity Is All I Request: Inspiration was MIA today.

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  • lunarlunacy
    November 19, 2008
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    Hope ya kept the original version of this V.

    Congratulations


    • DolceVito gold member
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you, Adrian....the original is the same...would like to add to it, though...had to keep it short for the contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 7, 2008
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    That's my brand of insanity right there!

  • Mickie27
    November 5, 2008

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    It is the threat of going insane that worries me. Sanity is what we all seek your words dance across the page.

    Excellent.


    • DolceVito gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      Thank you for reading and commenting...Crits and compliments are always welcome.


  • Gulfbreeze
    November 5, 2008
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    lol... I will call the doctor for you dear, take two asprins and I do hope you feel better tomorrow...
    This is a hoot. Probably crazy like a fox, i wish you all the best. I wouldnt change a thing, it might upset your apple cart...lol


    • DolceVito gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      Thank you...Ahem, Viagra works better than aspirin...Upset my apple cart, please do upset my apple cart.


  • Jim Berkheiser
    November 4, 2008

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    Creative, witty and charming write especially for Quixote fans like myself. I loved the reference to familiar characters and items from the classic Cervantes tale. Bien, amigo, muy bien.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Self proclaimed Don Quixote writing poetry wearing something contemporary cops an insanity plea...giggle-icous glee and three yellow smiley happy clappy chappies!!!


  • lunarlunacy
    November 4, 2008
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    Leapin Jahosafat... what an unsuspected ending. Dolce you are bonkers hoss. I was all getting into the literary references and then blammo... piss pot helmets and weathered pecker spears. hehehhehhe Right on, write on


  • petalblue2
    November 4, 2008
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    Intriguing...philosophy mingled with random humor. Will have to ponder this one for a bit Thanks for entering.
    K~

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