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Song 2

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You are my inspiration, my holy dove

Your eyes are as the pool of Siloam

and of Bethsaida

you are like a moment in time

cut out of the frabic of light beyond description

your ardency presence a grand portal into awareness

a gravitational field comsuming me ino your presence

a presence electromagnetically released into 3

dimensional realms, a beckoning force that pulls

me through time and space, and above the third

heaven into the place where Enoch went

all my little gods become senseless

beneath your keen awareness

and once again I am left speechless

and inspired to bare my soul like a whore's

bare behind

never the less balanced...

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  • "cut out of the frabic of light beyond description" FRABIC should of been fabric That sounds more like what you are trying to say there. Thank you for sharing this piece I like it.l


  • uziphiel
    February 4

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    wow is this in reverence to the bible?
    I like you place mating to your lover how beautiful the one is? a wonder just like king solomon and the place of his love... true poetic


    • Jalalbad gold member
      February 4
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      this just came from my mind. Though I used Bibical names, perhaps the names inspired the verses. Thank you for your comment.


  • guardianhost gold member
    January 2

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    Mystic , enthralling

    I felt like I was reading the diary of a celestial Queen.

    Provocative, very well penned.

     

    I hope you expand this one...it has almost a novel feel to it.


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    Wonderful inspiration Judy
    This is an excellent write, so deep and mystic
    Thank you for sharing

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