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Hateful much? Yes, yes I am.

I sit in silence staring blankly thoughts in my head are judging you
I won’t find anything I admire, but I can’t tell if it’s real or untrue
Take all you are completely, rape you threw and threw
I see your lies, your boosts, and all that egotistical bullshit
I work with the puzzle pieces and I force them to fit
All your sins and the repulsive sociopath crimes you commit
Of all the things in this world I can’t explain
Through my own confusion, wondering if I’m insane
I know this to be true
I fucking hate you.
I don’t know what his or her name is
I don’t care what he or she really does
Every twisted and sinister face passing me by
Deserves to feel righteous justice then die
I can’t seem to get even a little sleep
Words echo in my mind “Life is cheap”
I want to scream into the darkness
Constant feelings of hate I try to suppress
I can’t keep trying to deny it
I wonder so often if it’s my wrists I should slit
Compassion, care, love, human empathy
Nothing but words, I have no sympathy
Keeping my head down, fury clenching my fist
No one in this fucking world should even exist
Head is pounding, nose is bleeding, try to keep control but it will persist
Biting my bottom lip, doing my best to resist
All I can think of is killing you
Reap what you sow, pay me what is due
Show no mercy, bathe in the sinner’s blood
Watch the world burn watch its people choke in a flood
Soft spoken voices in my brain are constant
Words of spiteful hate, twisted into a sickening chant
I want to die.
I want the see burning in the sky
Hear a human voice in a terror felt cry
I need to feel war.
I just can’t take this shit anymore.

Destroy.

Author notes

Yeah, this could of been alot better. Alot. If I had really bothered to take the time to make it flow, and have better imagery. But, I didn't care, and I don't think I ever will.

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  • Stormy Days
    November 21, 2008
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    this it good i really like it

    p.s. thanks for the comment on my poem


  • Abstract Image
    November 12, 2008

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    wow such a hateful poem and it was frecking awesome and i'm sorry i can't make my message long I'm having some problem typing right now because my hand won't stop shaking and i keep messing up but dude i really liked this it was awesome.

  • Historically Here
    November 5, 2008

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    sweet as fuck, all of your h8 narrowed down to this and it speaks so loudly. on occassion ive tried to write shit like this but it wouldnt go to paper. in any case this has flow and some fuking class imagery