Nature shows her hues
Orchestrated views
Vivid coloration
Eventual defoliation
Morning sunrise slow
Bearing frosty glow
Early hunters go
Return with game to show
Author notes
Title was changed to comply with a contest rule, sorry I initially missed that one...
.
In a list
A contest entry
- November Acrostics Contest by Barbara.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
SO BEAUTIFUL
from Mother Nature does flow, sweet hues of orchestrated views...coloration,defoliation,slow sunrises and frosty glows...just reaches inside and pulls a sigh...niaish na brother for sharing your beautiful mind with me
-
A lovely acrostic. I am thrilled to see you are still writing form poetry--good for you! I have had a lot going on with a new book and a couple of family deaths and cannot manage to get on as often anymore. I just lost my daddy, too, and am very blue about that. I'll drop by from time to time and thank you for visiting me, my sweet brother! Belle
-
A acrostic done so well with little words but those used more than told the tale Well done Good luck in the contest
-
A great piece!
-
The sunrise isn't too slow peeking through my bedroom window. One thing, though... the title (In the rules, I asked "Don't use the word 'November' in your title")
Making the last four lines rhyme is pretty good.
I didn't notice until I read it a second time... that's how nice it flowed.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
-
I see you are hugely into form, I admire those who have the patience for them, this was so rich in imagery. Perfection. Best to you
-
Did you meanto have the word "bearing" twice? Apart from that htis is a fabulous acrostic
I really like the rhythm and rhyme of this piece and it shows the lovely natural beauty of the month ... 
good luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
