beneath the clouds
beneath their tears
for time untold
i waited here
for life. i'd scold
till death could hear
for love so bold
my mind is clear
when blood ran cold
i had no fear
it's all sublime
outside your tears.
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very creative. this is beautiful, and i like how you've weaved the emotions to create this masterpiece. keep penning lovely imagery too.
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Blarg.
Amazinnnng. Thats one word to describe it my love!
I wish I was this good :'( Hardy Har Harrr. Anyway, I kinda get this poem. In a way, to me, it sounds like your talking about rain. Bleh. I dunno. Don't listen to me. I am just a random 14 year old. 
I love it. ~Love, Your Worst Nightmare 
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I didn't get it. And for once I have to disagree and say that it didn't work for me.. that doens't mean that it isn't a good poem. Just not one of my favorites...that's for sure!
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