Listen to me as I speak to you,
of the pain I'm going through,
Nobody hears my tears of despair,
nobody cares I'm here,
People pretend I'm not real,
They see me as a pretty angel,
here to help them,
Then they leave,
happy and free,
While I'm still here,
down on my knees,
trying desperately to break free,
Pain shoots through my body,
A broken spirit nobody sees,
They believe I'm not scared,
They think I have no bonds,
but I am truly trapped,
Stuck here to forever burn,
Helping others stay alive,
I give them a life,
I will never have.
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Excelent
It's really deep and emotional. I related to it in many of the lines. "trying desperately to break free," "They think I have no bonds,
but I am truly trapped," "Helping others stay alive,
I give them a life,
I will never have."
It really moves me. It's touching and beautiful.
I feel it in my heart. This is such a beautiful poem.
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wow sexy this is an awesome poem! i love the sense of love and imagery in it. keep up the good work.
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Wow! That is one piece of writing. A broken spirit nobody see, I give them a life, I will never have. Such a painful thought. To give to someone what you could never have yourself. This is super!
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