Suicidal with a razorblade
Waiting flowers near an open grave
A tendency toward despondency
Fractured lives growing disaster
Dead inside, stitches over broken skin
Alcohol bleeding adolescent
Mascara glitters from the tears
Vodka bottle welts remain
Comments
-
V.Good
Very bold and striking poem, it is very open and simple in it's revealed state. The flow was o.k, but then again shorts like this are very artistically open; on a side note it might be interesting to expand slightly and add a event metaphorical, vague or even realistic to add overall effect.
Adding your comment:
