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Trapise Vagabond

Parlor games
and delayed trains
make skin lose pigment
and empty from heart scarlet

Vermilion wishes for your life
full of wine-colored extra exposure

rather than stanza former

 

Ramble range

on wide-track voyages

as reborn swan each day

 

Never fear imagery

stuborn heart manages

and you'll be sure to roam

but nevermore stray

 

Stroll past iotas and specks

wise to worthwhile respect

men in suits can't offer

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Happy birthday!

Just what came forth. heh

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Awesomesauce! Love this


  • alexandrathegreat
    November 5, 2008

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    Lol great ramble that made more sense on second read. Love the last stanza. You bring a extraordinary aspect to my birthday bash. Thank you for entering, friend.


  • notorious gold member
    November 5, 2008
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    Great present.