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My concentration is completely shot
when I think of you my face gets hot
with a single touch the world melts away
in your arms, forever, I could stay
I love your soft lips on mine
your smile makes my whole world shine
the love that radiates off of you
is so intense and oh so true
without your here in my life
without the thought of being your wife
without the love that I do need
I couldn't live, I couldn't breath.
you are the stars in my night sky
twinkling forever until we die
This love will last a lifetime
and you will always be mine
Until that day one of us goes home
and leave the other all alone
we know that we'll be together again
until the universe decides to end.
Together always for an eternity
In love forever is you and me.

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  • fall from grace
    November 16, 2008
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    gay

    really gay


  • OnePissedFilipino
    November 5, 2008

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    awwww that's sweet hon...

    "we know that we'll be together again
    until the universe decides to end."

    that was a great line... you did a fine job on this, have you shown it to him?