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Falling, Falling

I知 falling, falling, falling again
Down into a black abyss
I知 falling, falling, falling in love
Falling into your kiss

I知 falling down into your heart
Drowning in your eyes
No more tears, no more hurt
No more silent cries

I知 falling, falling, falling again
Your love is suffocating my soul
Falling, falling, falling once more
Deeper into this hole

I知 falling into a black abyss
Created by your love
I知 falling down, faster and faster
Whilst you watch me from above

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