How do I tell you that I love you.
Caring for you is the easiest thing in the world.
But love is confusing.
I dont want to lose you.
So many ways to show you I care.
A song perhapes but I cant sing.
A poem but I cant write a good one.
Or what if I bought you flowers.
Yes that it flowers but they will wither and die.
What If I just say I love you.
Yes I love you.
What did you think
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mmm aww thats so sweet i love you is always more then enough
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awww... thats so nice. your right about everything you said well exept when you said you cant write poetry. you totally can and this is a perfect example of it. flowers will wither and die. thats why i dont like them as a symbol of love. it seems like a bad omen. im glad you came up with something other than material things but you forgot one thing. you have to show you love someone too not just tell. if you learn to do that everything will fall into place for you. you wont hate yourself anymore bc you love someone else. thats important and its somthing you have to learn. focus on loving other ppl and you will realze the meaning of your life. <3
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Awww this is really good, somtimes its hard to explan how you feel and yet those 3 words are the simplest words to say and yet the hardest... somtimes the words "i love you" cant even explan it..
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aww.. its so sweet..adn so true..how do you tell the person you love how you truly feel? i mean honestly are there any words for it?
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awwwwwwwww
this is sooooo cute
your realy good
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This is really sweet. It's nice to read poems that don't rhyme sometimes as it is just your thoughts pouring out of you onto the page. This is Beautiful.
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Thanxs. My opinnon is rhymeing is too hard to get you point across. So I am a free verse kinda guy. I will try to rhyme but expect no rhymeing for me
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Awww this is so sweet. This is really beautiful. I hope that if this is real whoever it is that loves you said they loved you too.
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This was for my late girl friend. This is real
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Aw, this was really cute... and sad, but I can't pin point why I thought it was sad, it just made me sad lol
Bravo
Shawn
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Awsome!
:3 meh wuvs it.
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That's beautiful
And such a wonderful write.
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this is a beautiful write and you didn't it without me amazing! but you spelled "write" wrong but thats okay this is such a lovely poem it shows you care and love this person that they mean alot to you and you can't risk to lose them :] yes flowers are nice and singing a song to them is also nice but dedicating a song is sweet too :] and telling them I love you is the best way to tell show and tell someone you care or spending time with them
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Thank you for your help. Your a good friend. I fixed it thanks.
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No problem anytime and alright just keep on writing and you should comment some of my work if you want to that is
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Awwww how sweet and pretty. Its really cute. Did you write this for someone special or did it just come to you
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It was for my girlfriend be she passed away.
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oh my gosh im so sorry thats so sad. I give you all my best wishes and hopes ok, so please dont be too sad for im your friend (I think) so you can come to me for help dude.
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You can too if you need someone to talk to. yes ur my friend. ur also a good poet
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Im glad oyu think of me as a friend and a good poeet for I sometimes think people only like me for who I pretend to be but when im me everyone doesnt care and these poems express how I feel so thanks.
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