Above the trees the blood moon rises.
Does this signify the world is in crises?.
Will the people heed its blood red glow,
that will give this world a bloody show.
To ignore it would be a mighty mistake
and turn the party in a malicious evil wake.
So come and join me in its blood red shower
and together we will bask in its awesome undying power.
A contest entry
- Blood Moon/Harvest Moon by aboomer.
700 points, ended November 10, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like your title - fits in with the hint of darkness in your write.
Because I saw this moon the night before elections, I relate to the lines,
'To ignore it would be a mighty mistake
and turn the party in a malicious evil wake.' - odd of me, I know...lol
Anyways, nice images and emotion in this. Thank you for your entry.
Best wishes in the contest.
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I really like this. Great write!
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Blood moon, Evil moon
Thank you for your comment
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To me the rhyme is fine, reads smoothly, I did stumble a little in places, especially the longer lines. Love the content tho, you make it sound very inviting, awesome read. Good luck in the contest
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Blood moon, Evil moon
thank you for your comment.I must admit that I to stumbled writing it.
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the first rhyme doesn't seem to fit as well as the rest, but i like your take on the prompt here, it's well done, dark but beautiful, i'd join you under the moon, i love the moon!
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