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Others Slumber, I Awaken

Daylight brings too many things,
A world, I've explored in the light,
Though I find, I much prefer,
The still moments of the night..

I'm just waiting for the moon.

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    This is a lovely interpretation of the prompt, I love waiting for the moon, just beautiful. Best to you in the contest