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Showing Mercy Is Not In My Nature.

 

 

Bloody hand print

on an open door,

where she was dragged

unwillingly to her bedroom.

 

He had burst in the door,

grabbed her by her hair,

and pushed a knife

to her delicate throat.

 

Once tied naked

to her bed by her wrists,

he cut and sliced her,

in every inch he could find.

 

He used every fiber

of hate that he had

in his dirty body

to inflict her pain.

 

His hate of his own life.

His long for his own death.

His lust for a long needed fuck.

 

Her long blonde hair

smeared with red,

Her white delicate body

now chopped and bloody.

 

He had left her precious face

until lucky last.

And as he thrusted up inside her,

tears ran down her perfect complexion.

 

Pressing the knife

up against soft cheek,

a trickle of crimson water

flowed freely.

 

Then he threw the knife,

across the room,

into the wall,

so it stood on end.

 

He fucked her merciless,

for hours and hours,

not letting her unconsciousness take over

he made her live through it.

 

Come and blood

all over the white sheets,

her wrists tied with rope,

gnawed through to the bone.

 

After hours of her torture

he finished his work.

He had no reason to live

and so over to the knife.

 

Standing at the foot of the bed,

her eyes widening in fear and torture,

he held the knife to his own throat

and slit it across, ending his own pain.

 

So he fell to the floor,

Dead and satisfied.

And there he left her to be found,

Her long blonde hair

smeared with red,

and her wrists tied with rope,

gnawed through to the bone.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes


A leaf from Deathcore's book. Thought I'd write one like that.

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  • Memorable
    November 27, 2008
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    Brutal. Well done Dani.


    Memorable.

  • misterfish
    November 5, 2008

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    Very well written. Despite me not usually liking rape poems, I genuinely liked this one, which is no easy feat.

    Again, well done.


  • SageyBaby
    November 4, 2008

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    My gosh dani, you did me proud , i love the way you write, i dont understand how you can piece words together like this, its amazing, its stunning it took my breath away. loved the descritpions, wonderful strong imagery "His hate of his own life.

    His long for his own death.

    His lust for a long needed fuck" strong, powerful, effective and good alliteration on the "L". Amazing. loved it. welldone x


    • November-Dani
      November 4, 2008
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      Thank you so much! Im glad that you liked it. All feedback is appreciated. Thanks for the awesome comment!
      Dani.


  • Deathcore
    November 4, 2008

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    Oh, nice. I think I had a mental orgasm while reading it. lol. Really good, if you were trying to write my style.

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