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Space within

my heart brims
with knowledge of do's and don'ts,
I put a seed of realisation
soil rich in weeds,
plant doesn't germinate in stuffed.

I must clear all hoe
put kernel, tend it
new takes place of its own from nowhere.

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"In this profound poverty of being nothing,
every something is a present."

http://www.jeanniezandi.com/

so true, knowledge never leads to realisation. At times it is impediment. Always new comes out of nothing.

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  • maa gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    you have chosen a powerful and very appropriate metaphor here in response to the contest-prompt ... our attachment to wanting to be(come) "somebody" is perfectly symbolized by the garden overgrown by weeds ... and the "nothingness" so many of us fear so much is presented truthfully as the soil labored by the watchful eye (I) of consciousness ... all that is not "real" will dissolve, all concepts and beliefs uprooted by the gardener's loving hand ...

    perfect ...
    maa


  • Sandal
    November 5, 2008

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    inspiring

    Indeed, a full cup cannot receive any more, it is the empty one that receives fresh brew. The garden is a rich source of metaphor, I like this one. Best of luck!


    • Venugopal gold member
      November 5, 2008
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      thank you so much! you indeed is my guiding spirit


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    new takes place of its own from nowhere
    that line is so true
    Trust and just be and watch your garden grow
    love this my friend
    thank you for sharing
    God bless you...


    • Venugopal gold member
      November 4, 2008
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      thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am encourged to write just because friends like you keep me moving

      with lots of love

      Venu

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