Outside,
Under the colour lit trees,
Right next to the Church.
Forever in my mind.
I will remember it always.
Racing heart beats,
Sound blanked out,
The focus on just us.
Kaleidoscope of colour in my heart,
I can't stop thinking about it,
Sensual, caring, perfect.
Sensual, caring...perfect.
Author notes
hmmm, well I hope this is enough, hope its got enough expression in it, i wrote it from the heart so its just how it came out.
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- Big Emotion... by Walking Oxymoron.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 23 entries
Gold trophy winner
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What do you think?
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Just thought I'd add....a well deserved gold hun, welldone x
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age does not matter if you are happy, by this poem I see that you were happy. f*ck what everyone else thinks...I was there and learnt my mistakes. do what you want, no one can live your life for you x great write
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God, you have no idea how much I Love This.
Acrostics... the repetition in the right places...
All the ingredients, I tell you... -
Didn't know you had it in you!
It's mushy.
Just not what I'm used to.
Surprised it's you! Good write! Just don't tell the world he's 37! -
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age does not matter if you are happy
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well unfortunately I had to tell the parents and there basically telling me it can' t go on and i have to give it up. they seam to think i can just say ok, fine whatever you want, i can just forget about him.
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i think your last two lines sum it up, great poem, you can tell it came from the heart, best of luck in the contest
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