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corpse bride

 

 

Un-veiled and sweet
liquors blushing pride,

full of hopes and dreams

.....scarred.


Bitten nails
clawing envy,
luscious lips
thirst to nip.

Noose of truth

stockings white

shapes the lies
firm-ly denied.

Sultry eyes
lash to mute.

Lure for bait

weeping fate.

Black pearl gates
creak open wide
inviting hungered

souls inside…

Sip and taste
nocturnal wine
aged in cellars

wept despair.

Bottoms up,
my love…
sweetly,
have your fill.
Patience is not virtue,
when you do not live to tell.











































Author notes

Contest prompt: "Intoxicated"

I wrote of the duality of intoxicated..and the deadly intoxication that liquor
can provide,
when you ...innocently discover...you are a corpse's bride, addictively.

written soberly.

picture is lovely dark artist,
*Maliciarosenoire@deviantart.com

(truly, a creepy write)
even for me.

A contest entry

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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    thumbs up

    great to read, write on my sister


  • Hell In Harmony
    November 4, 2008

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    Un-veiled and sweet
    liquors blushing pride,

    full of hopes and dreams

    .....scarred.


    good emotion


    Noose of truth

    stockings white

    shapes the lies
    firm-ly denied.


    slant rhyme <3


    Black pearl gates
    creak open wide
    inviting hungered

    souls inside…


    intriguing.


    Bottoms up,
    my love…
    sweetly,
    have your fill.
    Patience is not virtue,
    when you do not live to tell.

    good ending

    thanks and goodluc