Shreds of my heart on the ground
burnt and trod on no love found
the wound that rubbed off
when I broke my best friends heart
I love him but its just not enough
I cant go on hurting him so
how will I tell him I'm not on love too?
time stop the pain and help me think
of what to do
his pain is mine
and it kills him to not have me in his arms
but I can not be his
it just feels wrong
to love but not be in love hurts those
who you care about that have fallen for you
but can not make you fall too
it kills me inside to see them die
but I can not feel what they feel
not when my heart is in shreds on the ground
then there is no heart to love
an emotionless void with a heartless love
is something far less than what I owe that friend
I die with them but live after they die
I'm sorry I cant feel even after I tried
A contest entry
- Love: Both Ends of the Spectrum by Itzamna.
550 points, ended November 25, 2008, 20 entries
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feeling bad about betrayal? this has to be the worst sort
Comments
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Wow this was a great write hun I really glad you entered my contest -
Oh this is beautiful!
it just feels wrong
to love but not be in love hurts those
who you care about that have fallen for you
I love this part! -
W.o.w. "Thats about all i can say. such raw emotion. its sad but in a good way... great read!
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ohh it is such emotion filled poem, this to i have done so i can relate and feel it. so much pain, such a sad poem, sad poems make the best.
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