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Loves Longing For - Sonnet XXI

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With undulating guidance love can vouch

a worth, where idle times explain them woes

be added to the loveliness it'd pose

against the etch devine of a cosy couch.

Whence lovelorn duly most encroached upon,

'Tis weary, yet with time, doth credit for

togetherness be lost in thee adore,

aroma claims enchantment from the reborn

It renews from the remnants worthy be 

a lineage to conceive it mystery,

which chose a lifetime for it all to rise.

If love were found to be the fastest cause,

for break up - to prevent it patience 'twas.

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1312 - Option 1

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  • michael13
    November 4, 2008
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    Wonderful!

    tis it has been since 8th grade since i have read such a wonderful poem.


  • BaalHammon
    November 4, 2008
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    i love the original William bu this proves that you are also a great writer. I really loved this!


  • Bella Cullen
    November 4, 2008
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    umm..wow! i thought it very beautiful.