Our bodies pressed together tightly
I can feel heat radiating from your pores
The music puts my mind in a trance
I can only see you, feel you
Your hands on my hips
Clinging to each of my curves
The night goes on
I've lost track of time
But before I have to leave
I'll leave my mark on your heart
A single peck just to start
But baby believe me this will be so much more
Author notes
I'm just starting this poem and I know it's a mess but I'm over filled with emotion and I cant concentrate.
I've also decided I'm gonna make this into a series of poems that will tell the story of my relationship with this guy so keep up...
anyways you probably need some background first, i've know this guy for a year and a half, he lives about 2 hours away in a different city, i'm completely head over heels in love with him and i know he loves me too, we do not date but it kinda feel like we do because he calls me baby and stuff, he text or calls me everyday to talk and remind me that he loves me and misses me, he is amazing in every way,
...so obviously you can tell that this first poem is about us being at a party.
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Wow-seseses. You should not be thinking these terrible, dirty things Jesi. I'm so disappointed. Lolzzzz, just kidding of course. You really are full of emotion. This poem is obviously no different. I can feel and see everything happening as I read, and that's exactly the effect you should have on people when writing. You continue to amaze me with your brilliant art everyday! Damn... if only I had been this good when I was 15. Or 16. I think you're 15. Anyway, I'd be fucking spectacular right now. Oh, if only. =]
Great job. -
This is very beautiful and such a sweet
piece that you have written here! Thanks a lot
for sharing it here and keep up the great work!
Jeremy0826
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