an ode is a kinda like a lemon cupcake with curly ising accept that you use words instead of shugar.
words are free so you can throw as many as you don't want. if you don't have enuf of your own, you can get some from a dic... dicshunurry though most peeple are too lazy to use it therefore it gives them a headache.
also it's difficult to find something if you don't know what you are looking for. especially if you have zillions of opshuns.
It's always best to start with letter a. though if you like you could start anywhere so long as you remember to bookmark.
that is so you don't get lost in the big words.
I think big ideas are better than big words but small ideas are equally better. big or small, they have to be the right size because fit is most impotant.
that's what mr. seinfeld says .
he is my naybore and every sunday he pays me two dollars to shine his shoes. they are the smartest pair of shoes you'll ever see and if you think he'll let you rub them you're wrong.
they are so smart that they are always outrunning each other. that's how Mr seinfeld gets to go places. like yesturday I saw them go to miss drew's house.
I wish I were as fast as those shoes.
bet they saw everything that I missed because the blinds were drawn.
Author notes
prompt: Tony B. Reyes, 11, a mentally challenged boy, composes an ode to Jerry Seinfeld's shoes and how he wishes to be them; 1994
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gosh, krizaa, yous supuh smert!
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gahh, this is excellent. the voice, the purposeful misspellings, the little lesson. crummy comment, i know, but i liked this quite a bit. great job with the silly prompt!
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I love the paragraph about ideas...it has real depth...and is here hidden in this very amusing and touching piece.
Excellent stuff.
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very cute and clever, A+ for Little Anthony
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haha what a funny one
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Tony B. Reyes, 11, a mentally challenged boy, composes an ode to Jerry Seinfeld's shoes and how he wishes to be them; 1994
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