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To thee my heart anew.
By bounds of good-
To the depths of evil.
From sreaming is ranting-
From laughter and cheers
my heart stretches.
My throat aches-
My eyes bleed.
There is never more;
a heart that is drained.

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  • Ademon
    February 18

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    beautiful flow of words and mental image that you've provided...needs a title huh? I think your title is in your poem... "Different Heart Strings" or "My Heart Stretches" quite a beautiful poem! Nicely done!